Our local newspaper has a weekly Haiku contest.
They throw out a topic like GRASS or CHERRIES.
The winner gets $25.
I haven't entered.
I haven't played along.
But yesterday, I was thinking of all the things that remind me of summer.
And rather than make a LIST,
I wrote some Summer Haikus.
Don't laugh.
You can do it too!
Three lines - first line = 5 syllables, second line =7 syllables, third line = 5 syllables.
Write your own and comment back.
I want to read yours!
SUMMERTIME
Long days of nothing
No plans, no obligations
Do just what you want
Under breezy trees
White clouds drift through turquoise skies
Views mottled by leaves
Juice dripping freely
From melons, peaches, cherries
Staining chins and hands
Swim suits and towels
Coppertone wafts through the air
True scent of summer
Orange is last to be picked
Ice cold, sticky bliss
Sizzle, Steam, Smoke
Eating to the crickets’ song
Hamburgers, Hot Dogs and Ribs
Sizzle, Steam, Smoke
Eating to the crickets’ song
Hamburgers, Hot Dogs and Ribs
Slowly, slowly falls
the sun into night. Streetlights on.
Darn! Time to go in.
5 comments:
Did you steal these from a book or did you really sit down and make all these up? Good job either way.
WOW!!!! I could visualize summer as I was reading your Haiku. I loved it!!! My creative juices is zilch at the moment, but I if I think of any, I'll come back and share it with you!
I'm impressed! You need to submit yours to the paper.
One hundred degrees
in the shade. Too hot to move.
Can't wait for winter!
Relatives coming.
One more trip to Disney World
Visitors, go home!
Trip to Cocoa Beach
Hot sun,sand, watch for riptides
I'm sunburned again.
Love them! Totally what I picture summer to be.
well done.
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